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Moravagine's avatar

Dude, I am begging you to stop using the word "agentic." Begging.

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Brian Wright's avatar

Clearly you are a smart guy and Barkan is a terrific writer. Many of the things you said are unarguable, or to argue them is to take the side of the devils versus the angels. There is however an inherent blindness to this kind of writing and the critique's stance. The fact is, nobody, outside of an elitist clique, or New York wannabee's, are going to bother to break this syntax down and glean any meaning from it. It is at heart, classist and requires a certain degree of educated appreciation for an esoteric and fenced activity. Readers, if they want, can participate vicariously the way they can particpate in pornography or any writing that is physical at its core, bu why would they? The tennis passage reminds me of Tolstoy's Lev cutting wheat or Updike's Rabbit, taking off his restrictive jacket to play ball with some random kids. In each instance, there was a deeper sub meaning to the text other than the integration of the physical and psychological moment. Until the novel can rebuild its foundation in some kind of ideological relevancy, it's a pointless exercise in classism, and going the way of the dinosaurs may be the best outcome for an outmoded form.

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